Review: Close Range

Netflix dumped a bunch of new movies into their catalog recently. I watched Close Range starring Scott Adkins, one of the new releases, with hubby last weekend.

Darling hubby likes action flicks with martial arts, knife fighting, guns, and umpteen fight scenes. I like a good action film too, but I zone out in those never-ending scenes where a fight scene takes longer than one in real life. Example? The Transformer movies where they keep going on and on and on...seemingly forever.

Synopsis

Close Range is about Colton MacReady (Scott Adkins) who was a hero but now seems to be an outlaw. He's out to save his niece who was kidnapped by a member of a drug cartel. Unfortunately, the cartel comes after him, and war erupts on the secluded ranch where the niece, her mom, and our outlaw hero are packing to leave.

When the local law is on the cartel payroll, how can one man stop them from killing the three of them?

Our hero, as portrayed very believably by Adkins, manages very nicely. If you're an action fan, you've probably seen Adkins before since he's starred in many other films of this type.

My 2 Cents

Chad Law and Shane Dax Taylor wrote Close Range. I wish they had given MacReady more emotional depth. I think that would have made this film a cut above the ordinary. Perhaps, it's more Adkins portrayal that gives the film the emotional distance.

I've read a bit about Adkins who admires the minimalism Clint Eastwood uses in his movies. Adkins said: "I prefer to play the villain or the antihero." So I understand his choice of roles and the way in which he portrays the character.

If you like an anti-hero who does the right thing because of a sense of duty, MacReady is good, but I think he could have been so much more. I also think Adkins can rise to the challenge.

With great graphics during the opening credits, non-stop action, some good tunes in the score, and a foot-tapping song like Everybody Got To Fall Down by Jake La Botz during the closing credits, Close Range is worth seeing.

Watch the trailer on YouTube. If you don't subscribe to Netflix, you can rent or buy Close Range on Amazon.

Takeaway Truth

If you liked John Wick, with its ballet of violence, you'll probably enjoy Close Range.

Rules of Write Club

Do you know the 1999 movie Fight Club? My sons – and my daughters too – love the Brad Pitt/Edward Norton film.

It’s so much a part of pop culture that you see references to it in other TV shows. On NCIS, the character Anthony DiNozzo, played by Michael Weatherly had a running gag through an episode in which he recited the Rules of Fight Club.

I think writers can learn a lot from those rules – especially if I tweak the concept and rules a bit and slant them toward writers. And add a video.

Readers, stick around. I think you’ll find this entertaining too. In fact, here's the video first that illustrates the rules that follow.


Rules of WRITE CLUB

1st RULE of WRITE CLUB: You do not talk about writing. You write.

2nd RULE of WRITE CLUB: You DO NOT talk about writing. You write.

3rd RULE of WRITE CLUB: If someone says “stop” or goes limp, taps out, the fight is NEVER over. If you slip up, you keep writing.

4th RULE of WRITE CLUB: Only one guy to a write. That’s correct – you do it alone. Day by day. In sickness and health.

5th RULE of WRITE CLUB: One write at a time. Focus on the book at hand. Don’t be seduced by the siren call of other characters and ideas.

6th RULE of WRITE CLUB: No shirts, no shoes. No clothes. Who cares? You’re in this fight alone, writing by yourself, in the privacy of your office and your imaginary world. Wear any darn thing you want, or don’t. Who’s to know?

7th RULE of WRITE CLUB: Writes will go on as long as they have to. A book is finished when it’s finished. Only you know when that is.

Takeaway Truth

The bottom line for writers? Write. And trust your instincts.

Writing Tip from PF Karlin: What Men Notice About Women

Today I'm introducing you to an author who may be new to you. PF Karlin is the author of Destiny Reborn which is Book 2 of the Kismet Collection.

About PF Karlin

PF Karlin is a Yankee, hailing from Chicago, Illinois. She graduated from Amundsen-Mayfair City College with an ADN in nursing too many years ago to mention.

After having her fill of cold weather she packed up, left the Chicago winters behind and moved to Texas where she currently spends her time basking in the warm weather and living a comfortable live with her husband of thirty years.

Karlin spends as much time as she can with her family, enjoying her son, a marvelous daughter-in-law, and two phenomenal grandchildren.

Find PF Karlin Online

Facebook Author Page * Facebook Profile Page * Twitter * Pinterest

About Destiny Reborn

“When reality knocks at your door, do you open it?”

In her new reality, Belinda finds a breathing, flesh and blood version of Robert. The only problem, he doesn’t act like he knows her and he wants nothing to do with her.

Belinda has no alternative but to go on planning and living her life as if she had never met him. However, Robert continuously walks in and out of her life. Belinda manages the chance meetings and even turns Robert into a friend until he reveals a secret that changes both of their lives forever.

Both Destiny Reborn and Shattered Fate, Book 1, Kismet Collection, are available in Ebook and Paperback editions.

Shattered Fate on Amazon * Shattered Fate on Barnes and Noble.

Destiny Reborn on Amazon * Destiny Reborn on Barnes and Noble.

Writing Tip From PF Karlin

Know how to describe what a man notices about a woman.

Guys don’t notice what you’re Wearing—they only see your body parts.

Writing as a woman in a man’s point of view can be difficult. Let’s face it, men think differently than we do and we all know they hail from the other side of the galaxy. So how do we get inside their heads to write about what they are really thinking?

The first and most obvious step is to come right out and ask them. When we were writing our second book, Destiny Reborn, we decided to do some real life research and ask several men a simple question to obtain more insight into the male psyche.

Ask The Right Questions

“What do you feel when you see someone you’re attracted to for the first time?”

This was not the right question. Man #1 gave us a blank stare. Man #2 answered with a long drawn out,  “Ahhh.” Man #3 was a bit more vocal and politely answered, “How the heck do I know? I’m a guy and guys don’t talk about stuff like that.”

So, it was back to the drawing board and more research. You see, according to different studies, men are more concrete thinkers. They have all the same feeling as women do but they tend not to want to talk about them as much or explain them to anyone. No new information there, all women know we like to talk about our feelings.

Better Question

We asked the next question of the same three men, “What do you notice first about a woman?”

Man #1: “The face first, then legs and butt.”

Man #2: “If she’s in the distance the figure, but up close the face.”

Man #3: “I’m kinda a butt guy.”

The Clothes Question

“Do you notice the details of the clothes a woman is wearing?”

Man #1: “No. I just know they have clothes on. Then my imagination takes care of that problem.”

Man #3: “I notice more how they are worn rather than what’s being worn.”

Man #2: (He had the most insightful answer.) “The first thing I notice is the shape. It makes a difference in what is being accentuated. For instance, if a woman is wearing a man’s shirt with only high heels, I’d notice her legs. If she had something low cut on, I notice her top, but I wouldn’t be able to describe the details of what see was wearing.”

Bingo! They notice body parts.

Examples Using This Information

Keep in mind that men are concrete thinkers and don’t notice the details about clothes. Now for the tough part—how do you put that down on paper when writing in your hero’s point of view.


Example 1: What not to do

When Belinda stood, he held his breath. She wore a spaghetti strap, pale blue, silk camisole. The layered skirt came to mid-thigh, which exaggerated the length of her legs in those heels. It featured a muted swirl pattern of white and pale blue, his favorite colors, and against her tanned skin, she looked so damn sexy. She wore her hair up in a ponytail that swayed back and forth keeping rhythm to the bounce of every step she took.

Why That Doesn't Work

Do you see the problem? No average man would be able to tell you all the detail down to the muted swirl pattern on the skirt.

Example 1: Re-written

When Belinda stood, he held his breath. She wore a skimpy camisole. The skirt came to mid-thigh, which exaggerated the length of her legs in those heels. With her tanned skin, she looked so damn sexy. She wore her hair up in a ponytail that swayed back and forth keeping rhythm to the bounce of every step she took.

Not perfect, but much better.

Example 2: What not to do

The sound of the click from the lock on the bedroom door caused him to raise his head toward the hall. His mouth dropped open as Belinda floated out into the glowing light of the living room Christmas tree. At first, he couldn’t move or say a word. He could only stare.
“Robert, say something. Do I look alright?” She twirled around and the light blue chiffon of the strapless, sweetheart bodice, knee length dress floated in a circle with her.

Again, the problem is too much detail about the dress.

Example 2: Re-written

The sound of the click from the lock on the bedroom door caused him to raise his head toward the hall. Belinda floated out into the glowing light of the living room Christmas tree. At first, he couldn’t move or say a word. He could only stare.
“Robert, say something. Do I look alright?” She twirled around in a light blue, chiffon dress.

Still not perfect but much better.


Example 3:

In the final example we just played around with how we thought Robert, our hero, would see Belinda in her black dress.

Robert scanned Belinda who looked sexy as hell in her black dress. It had long sleeves and the top half was cover in lace. The tone of her smooth skin peeked through over her shoulders and arms while the back plunged in a “V” to her waist. The skirt came mid-thigh and bounced as she moved. Her heels gave her legs a long slender appearance. She wore her hair up, twisted in curls on top of her head, exposing her neck. He could tell she had very little on underneath, and the sheer sight of that little black number draped over her delicate frame, made him want to explore. From what he could tell, one shiny button at her waist was all that kept the dress in place.

Robert watched her lift her fork and take dainty bites of food. If she keeps eating like that, I’ll never get that dress off of her. A ray of light bounced off that button and teased him. Excitement stirred within him. But, he just smiled, raised his glass to her, and took a sip of champagne, biding his time.
The dress intrigued him. She obviously wasn’t wearing a bra or stockings. He caught a glint from her side. What would happen if I unfastened that button?

On their way back to the cottage, they walked down a path lit by ornate dim lamps. He rubbed his fingers over her bare back. She snuggled in closer. He felt a slight quiver rush over her skin as he floated his fingers under the “V” of the dress. Robert reached in under her arm and brushed the underside of her breast. She giggled. He pulled her closer.

As soon as he closed the door of the cottage, he took her in his arms. She rolled her head
back and let out a gasp while he kissed the crevices of her neck. He toyed with the button at her side. Next to her ear he whispered, “I’ve been wondering about this button all night.”

He nibbled at her earlobe. “And what would happen if I unbuttoned it.” With a slight flick of the finger, the button released and the dress back fell open.

Jackpot!

This has much less detail about what Belinda is wearing and much more about Robert’s reaction to it. It is much more believable from a man’s point of view.

To summarize everything we know, men know a woman is dressed, but they have no eye for or interest in the details of what she is wearing. What they are more interested in is what is underneath or how clothes accentuate a body part.

So when writing in the man’s Point of View, keep it simple. Think like a caveman because a lot of what a man sees stems from years of genetics that are far too complicated for this little article.

Takeaway Truth

This is one of the best articles I've read about describing a woman through a man's eyes.

Love Christmas Romance Collection Excerpt by Traci Hall

I'm pleased to present another Chapter 1 sneak peak of a novella from the 2016 Romance Collection LOVE CHRISTMAS.

This collection of Christmas novellas, written by 20 bestselling authors and inspired by your favorite Christmas songs, will be available in early October for the holiday season.

I'll post the pre-order date and links as soon as they are available so subscribe to the blog so you don't miss an excerpt or the latest news about what promises to be an amazing holiday romance box set.

The Chapter 1 excerpt this time is from USA Today bestselling author Traci Hall. Her bio appears after the excerpt so be sure and read it. The spotlight is yours, Traci!


Blue Christmas by the Sea
by Traci Hall
Chapter One


Sneak Peek Unedited Draft originally published on The Authors Billboard

I’d like to give a shout out to my title prize winner–Linda–thanks for playing our Love, Christmas title contest! I was lucky enough to draw your suggestion.

***

Tamsyn Lee balanced a tray of steaming turkey breast, mashed potatoes, gravy, cranberry sauce and green bean specials on her arm, waiting for the diners to clear space on the table for their Thanksgiving meals. The Village would be open for one more hour before closing early—six pm—to give their employees some holiday time off.

“This looks delicious,” the dark-haired father said. His wife, and mom to the two cuties under ten with the same shade of teal blue eyes, helped the children with their napkins while Grandma shifted the salt and pepper shakers to make more room for the plates Tamsyn set down.

Mom agreed, her hum distracted by the youngest boy fidgeting on his seat as he reached for a fluffy biscuit. Tamsyn eyed the table—full water glasses, extra napkins, silverware. “Anything else for you?”

“No,” Grandma said with a pleased smile. “This is perfect.”

Perfect. The happiness in the older woman’s voice made Tamsyn long for her own family. So not happening this year.

Tamsyn nodded and left, returning the now empty tray to its station by the pick-up counter. The owners had allowed split shifts for the day, though Tamsyn had taken a double. The tips were good, and her family was in New York. Sort of.

She dared a look at the front door and bit back a groan—the line for turkey dinners spilled out into the festive streets of their beachside downtown. Why weren’t these people eating ham and green bean casserole at home? In comfy pants, stretched out on the couch to watch Holiday Inn while finishing pumpkin pie…

Thanksgiving meant Christmas was only a month away, and that was Tamsyn’s very favorite holiday—she liked it even better than her birthday.

Her plan had been to suck it up for a lonely Thanksgiving and fly to her family home in New York for Christmas, but her parents had decided a divorce was more important than the holidays. After forty years of hanging stockings together?

“Tamsyn—table three is ready for their drink order as soon as you drop off the lobster club at table two.”

“Got it, Michael.” She headed toward the waiting plates. “Thanks.”

She and Michael’d had a thing when she’d first moved here a year ago—a thing that had quickly fizzled after they realized they made better friends than lovers. Besides, he was her manager at the seafood bar and grill she waitressed at, so they needed a clear line. He thought he could tell her to grab him a beer outside of work and that just pissed her off.

She’d spent the last six months sporadically dating but her heart, still mending over the real guy she’d loved and lost and the reason for her move from Manhattan, the one before Michael, just wasn’t in it.

“You sure you don’t want to join me and Nina for turkey later?” Michael asked as they passed each other in the aisle. “She really likes you. There will be other people there that you know. Monica, for sure.”

The restaurant world was a small community made even smaller in a town of less than five thousand people. Everybody knew each other, and most had dated at some point. “Nina is sweet…but I am okay. I have plans, so stop worrying about me.” She smiled to show that she appreciated his offer, but she wasn’t coming. Thanksgiving meant family to her, and right now hers was broken into pieces. She was the baby at twenty-six. Her two older brothers had married in New York, and then moved to opposite ends of the United States—Kody in Seattle, and Joe in Vermont.

She dropped off the lobster club sandwiches to the two friends celebrating the holiday—the women were locals, and came in a lot during the year. “Can I get you ladies anything else? Another glass of wine?”

“No, thanks,” the blonde said while the brunette smiled her agreement.

“I’ll check on you in a few minutes.” Waitressing could be hard, but with her bachelor’s degree in literature, she made more money in tips than an hourly wage working at the local library.

“Welcome to the Village. Can I take your drink order?” Two couples in their mid-fifties shared an inside table with a view of the ocean. November in South Florida meant cooler weather—seventies—without the humidity that most folks had a hard time acclimatizing to.

Tamsyn loved it. And now that she was mad at her parents, well, she might never go back to New York.

Her last table of the night was a single guy in his late twenties, maybe early thirties, with longish brown hair curling over his ears. Not stylish, but as if he couldn’t be bothered to get a trim.

“Can I get you something to drink?”

He looked up, his green eyes brilliantly set between dark brown lashes. Electric. Tamsyn took a step back, then decided she must be more tired than she’d realized.

“A Harp.”

His cheeks were slightly flushed, and she guessed it wasn’t his first drink of the day. “Are you visiting here?”

His full mouth thinned with annoyance. “No. Can I just give you my food order now, too? I’m not big on chit-chat.”

Jerk, Tamsyn thought. What a waste of gorgeous green eyes. “Sure. What will you have?”

“The special. If it’s any good? I hate dry turkey.”

If she was a mean person, she’d stick his plate of amazingly moist turkey under the broiler. Keeping her expression neutral, she nodded once. “I’ll be right back with your order.”

***

Evan Hawke watched the waitress walk away with a twitch of her ponytail and realized he’d been rude. Probably not a good idea to be a douche to the people who handled your food, he heard his ex-girlfriend say as if she was sitting right next to him.

Teresa had been right about a lot of things, including the fact they didn’t fit together for the long haul. She’d put up with his moods better than most and there were times he genuinely missed her way of teasing him out of a funk. Not often, and not enough to pick up the phone to ask her back into his life.

Pathetic. Or was it apathetic? Evan opened his smartphone to add the question in his notes section. Either way, he’d apologize to the waitress.

She was cute in a perky way. Long dark brown hair pulled back in a ponytail, big brown eyes. Probably wouldn’t know the difference between pathetic or apathetic. God, the last date he’d been on, the girl gave vapid a new name. He was part of the Internet generation, but he believed in proper punctuation, damn it. His editor told him there was a revolution against double quotes within a paragraph, when single quotes would do—easier, some claimed, to use without hitting the shift key.

Lazy, one-fingered typing was no reason to change punctuation as directed in the Chicago Manual of Style.

Not that he was thinking of dating her, he amended quickly as she walked toward him, her smile seemingly genuine. White short-sleeved blouse, black pants, black Converse tennis shoes. Maybe she wasn’t the kind to hold a grudge.

“Harp, and the turkey special,” she said. “I had them keep your plate under the heat lamp.”

Evan bristled until he realized she was joking. The all-nighter he’d pulled had zapped his sense of humor, and her dead-pan delivery was right on. “Listen, sorry about that.”

“No worries.” She put his draft beer on a coaster. “Would you like more water?”

He shook his head.

“I set aside a piece of pecan pie, unless you’d prefer pumpkin?”

“I don’t eat sweets.”

“It comes with the special,” she said, her smile fixed. “I can box it up—maybe you’ll want it later.”

“No, thanks. I don’t have a sweet tooth. I don’t see that changing any time soon.” How would taking the damn pie home for later make sense?

Her eyes flashed. “Fine. No pie.”

Chill out, Evan chided himself. He’d barely unpacked before realizing he needed sustenance—he’d eaten breakfast two days ago and an airplane packet of pretzels since. “It’s been a long day, and I don’t mean to take it out on you. I’m a lousy flyer,” don’t justify, just apologize, “and I probably should have stayed at the condo instead of coming out to eat.”

In a fit of desperation, he’d gotten the first flight out of New York and rented a condo overlooking the beach for two months. He’d written his bestseller here at the Village, four years ago, at a table in the back.

“There’s always delivery.” The waitress shrugged and pulled the bill from her black apron pocket. “Can I get you anything else?”

What a loaded question—no way would she believe that he’d returned to the Village in search of lost mojo. His publisher was losing faith and Evan was very aware that loyalty was completely dependent on sales numbers. It was unfortunate, Teresa had once said, that Evan’s first book was a lauded success. It made the following book’s luke-warm performance hard to swallow, and this third book, past deadline, had no hope of reviving his career since the story wouldn’t come.

Hence, his last-ditch effort before raising the white flag. JuJu, magic, whatever—Evan would do everything just as he’d done back then. Write the book at the Village. Eat the daily special. Drink Harp. Every single day until the book was complete.

Ditch the attitude, Evan. “No. Thank you.”

“We’re closing in fifteen minutes.” She stepped away from the table and gestured toward the front. “Take your time—you can pay at the door on your way out.”

Evan, so hungry his stomach clenched at the savory aroma of gravy, picked up his fork and swirled the tines through the white mound of potatoes. Buttery goodness exploded across his tongue. Green beans, cranberry sauce. Turkey so moist he cut it with the edge of his fork.

By the time he was through with the potatoes he could think clearly again. His writing career was in the tank, but he, Evan Hawke, Mystery Writer, would chase that bitch of a muse down and do whatever it took to get his magic back.


Traci Hall In Her Own Words

My favorite part of writing is coming up with a story idea and then fleshing it out until there is a brand new world–-with characters that could be people you’d hang out with. Real issues, even in a fictional setting, need to resonate with the reader and I love mixing it all together.

History with a romantic twist, add female guards and hot, sexy knights/nights :). An ancient curse? Even better! Or maybe you’d prefer sensual contemporary romance that takes place in a small town by the sea, where hearts are healed and love rekindled. Sand, sun and true love. Or how about the wild frontier of the Pacific Northwest? Gold mines, silver guns, emerald rivers.

If young adult is more your style, I’ve got boys in trouble, girls in trouble, or a teenage scientific prodigy raised in a Wiccan environment who blames the full moon for her problems. When it comes right down to it, the characters are what drive the tale. They keep us up at night to read Just One More Page…

Stuff of possible interest: *ahem* I’ve been interviewed on radio, web radio, web TV and Fox and Friends. I’ve been included in a ‘Fifty Great Writer’s You Should Be Reading’ anthology, and I’ve been in a few magazines. My books have garnered some awards and been ranked #1 on Amazon, and I’ve made the USA Today bestselling list.

Takeaway Truth

I hope you're getting excited about LOVE CHRISTMAS. This fabulous romance collection will be here sooner than you think. Come back next week for another excerpt.

Patriotism Begins At Home

In celebrating Independence Day, I wanted to share a quotation from Henry James.

He said: "I think patriotism is like charity--it begins at home."

I believe that is true--just as learning most things from manners to kindness to work ethic begins at home.

I love my country, and I don't mean that in a superficial glib way. Patriotism is more than a word to me. My dad was at Normandy, and I was raised on tales of heroism.

My husband feels as I do, and we raised our children with those patriotic ideals. So we believe that patriotism does begin at home.

Takeaway Truth

Today I celebrate my country, and the freedom I enjoy, purchased by the sacrifices of the men and women, through the centuries, who have fought and died to for this country. Thank you for making today possible.

Saturday Share: Recipe for Pistachio Cream Cheese Cake

In the United States, this weekend begins our celebration of Independence Day--July 4.

Most Americans have barbecue feasts for family and friends. So I thought I'd share a family recipe that's a great cool dessert for a holiday barbecue.

Pistachio Cream Cheese Cake

This is a 4 layer dessert that's super easy.

Layer 1 (This is a cookie layer that forms the base.)
1 1/2 cups plain flour
1 stick + 1 tablespoon butter, chilled
2 tablespoons sugar
1/4 cup chopped pecans

Mix the flour, sugar, and pecans. Grate the butter into this and mix well. Press into the bottom of a 9x13 baking dish. Bale at 350 degrees for 15 minutes.

Layer 2
Whip 2 cups heavy cream.
Whip together 8 ounces softened cream cheese and 2/3 cup powdered sugar.
Fold half the whipped cream into the cream cheese mixture and blend.
Spread this mixture on the cookie base (Layer 1)

Layer 3
In a mixer, beat 2 1/2 cups cold milk and 2 packages instant Pistachio Pudding until thickened. Spread this on top of the whipped cream, cream cheese mixture.

Layer 4
Spread rest of the whipped cream on top of everything. If you like, sprinkled more chopped pecans over the top.

Chill at least a couple of hours. Everyone will love this cold dessert. If you want to switch it up, use lemon or chocolate pudding mix instead of pistachio.

Takeaway Truth

Have a wonderful 4th of July holiday.

Quote to End the Week

Here's an encouraging thought to end the week.

In The Exotic Marigold Hotel, Sonny says: "Everything will be all right in the end... if it's not all right then it's not yet the end."

Repeat As An Affirmation

Everything will be all right in the end... if it's not all right then it's not yet the end.

Take heart if things aren't going your way.

Takeaway Truth

Have a wonderful weekend!